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In the future, more people will choose to go on holiday in their own country and not travel abroad on holiday. Do you agree or disagree?

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Travelling becomes the best way to spend a vacation. Some
people
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 argue that in the
future
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, most
people
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 will go on vacation in their motherland
instead
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 of travelling outside the
country
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.
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 essay will discuss why I would not support
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 view and will be analyzed
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further
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.
To begin
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 with, I believe in the
future
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, more
people
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 will choose to
travel
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 abroad on their holidays
instead
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 of spending it in their home
country
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. After hectic works,
people
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 would love to spend their vacation to keep their head away from their work and enjoy life. If they choose to
travel
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 abroad,
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 it helps them to explore a different environment, explore foods, meet different
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 compared to their home
country
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.
For instance
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, if a person lives in an Asian
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 and he/she can
travel
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 Europe so that he/she can experience cold weather, food and traditions. Because of these reasons, in the
future
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 travellers will decide to go abroad to spend their holiday to enjoy more.
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, Some individuals state that in the
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, the travellers decide to enjoy the places in their own
country
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.
This
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 would be a better choice for the
people
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 who want to save
money
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 as travelling outside the
country
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 will be more expensive in the
future
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. It is irrefutable that they are many places that
people
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 can enjoy in their own
country
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 with a minor budget.
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, since travelling within the
country
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 saves more
money
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 as there are no visa and airline expenses, they can
travel
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 to many places with the saved
money
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. Because of these reasons some
people
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 believe most
people
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 would choose travelling within the
country
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 rather than go abroad. To conclude, most
people
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 believe that travelling helps to heal their mind and body after hectic work schedules. There is a mix of ideas when it comes to travelling abroad or not. Even though travelling within the
country
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 saves time and
money
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, I strongly believe that
people
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 in the
future
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 would choose to
travel
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 outside the
country
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 as it gives a better experience to travellers.
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