Some people think that governments should ban dangerous sports, while others think people should have freedom to do any sports or activity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. OR Some people think that dangerous sports should be banned. Do you agree or disagree?

Banning dangerous
sports
,
for instance
, skiing, skydiving and so on, is a must, according to some.
However
, I personally believe that
instead
of imposing prohibitions, educating the participants about possible dangers and how to prevent them are essential.
First
and foremost, creating
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awareness about the risks associated with dangerous games
those
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who are interested in
such
activities.
This
is because even though
sporting
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are aimed to improve both physical and mental health, these often result in serious injuries and permanent disabilities. To illustrate, Shoemaker, a well-known
sports
car driver, met an accident
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years ago while going skiing, and he has not only recovered but left him with permanent brain damages.
Therefore
, I totally against limiting
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participation since
this
tends to be seen as
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of personal choice;
however
, awareness is the key.
Secondly
, all the adventurous
sports
personnel are trained before embarking
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the games. If they were given necessary practices, they seem to be well-rounded to participate
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sports
,
this
would minimise
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possibilities
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of anything goes wrong. In New Zealand,
for example
, Bungee jumpers are trained how to use safety equipment and various breathing techniques to avoid any
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. Certainly, it has been noted that these games are enjoyed by normal people without having prior experiences. When imposing
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on
such
sporting events, the industry, its workers and its followers tend to encounter serious financial loss and frustrations respectively. Due to
this
, I think it is better to allow the
sports
with proper training sections. In conclusion, people have different opinions on whether it is necessary to prohibit adventurous
sports
or not. I think it is unethical to ban, but participants need to be informed about risks
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important.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • severe injuries
  • fatalities
  • base jumping
  • bull running
  • extreme skiing
  • safeguard
  • well-being
  • regulating
  • avoidable harm
  • healthcare costs
  • burdening
  • personal freedom
  • autonomy
  • training
  • equipment
  • mitigated
  • personal satisfaction
  • mental health benefits
  • resilience
  • adventure
  • assess risks
  • public safety
  • unnecessary healthcare costs
  • outright bans
  • balanced approach
  • stringent safety standards
  • mandatory training sessions
  • adequately informed
  • safeguarding
  • public health
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