Some people think that governments should ban dangerous sports, while others think people should have freedom to do any sports or activity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. OR Some people think that dangerous sports should be banned. Do you agree or disagree?

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, skiing, skydiving and so on, is a must, according to some.

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, I personally believe that

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of imposing prohibitions, educating the participants about possible dangers and how to prevent them are essential.

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and foremost, creating

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awareness about the risks associated with dangerous games

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who are interested in

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activities.

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is because even though

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are aimed to improve both physical and mental health, these often result in serious injuries and permanent disabilities. To illustrate, Shoemaker, a well-known

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car driver, met an accident

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years ago while going skiing, and he has not only recovered but left him with permanent brain damages.

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, I totally against limiting

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participation since

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tends to be seen as

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of personal choice;

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, awareness is the key.

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, all the adventurous

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personnel are trained before embarking

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the games. If they were given necessary practices, they seem to be well-rounded to participate

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sports

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,

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would minimise

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the possibilities

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possibilities

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of anything goes wrong. In New Zealand,

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, Bungee jumpers are trained how to use safety equipment and various breathing techniques to avoid any

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. Certainly, it has been noted that these games are enjoyed by normal people without having prior experiences. When imposing

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on

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sporting events, the industry, its workers and its followers tend to encounter serious financial loss and frustrations respectively. Due to

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, I think it is better to allow the

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with proper training sections. In conclusion, people have different opinions on whether it is necessary to prohibit adventurous

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or not. I think it is unethical to ban, but participants need to be informed about risks

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important.