Some students take one year off between finishing school and going to university, in order to travel or to work. Do you think that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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few decades, it has become a debatable issue among the people that having a
break
between the institute and university
study
is worth doing or not.
Although
, a
gap
year brings lots of benefits for pupils. But
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will discuss both
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have a
gap
after their school so that they can explore
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different
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around the globe that will fit for their course that they want to get on it.
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, every institute has there
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teaching techniques and environment to make
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learning much easier for the students who
study
over there.
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, they can look for the country or city in
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is higher
that
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they want to do in their career
as a result
it will be helpful to them to get a job immediately after the completion of
study
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. In Canada, there is lots of opportunity of IT field people can easily make their career success after entering to
this
sector as it
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much higher wage as compared to other jobs and because of
this young adults
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from the overseas come there just for achieving their goals and
this
can be taken as
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. As result, the success rate got increase for the youngster while immediately going to university without getting proper time to think.
However
, having a
break
year can bring lots of
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from
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studies just because of
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and freedom they got during that particular period. While doing travelling or working can have long term consequences because it is really hard to get back the same concentration that they were having while in schooling. Some of the time,
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situation
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going in
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direction as they start attraction towards
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illegal things
such
as drugs, theft, many more.
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, a recent
study
from the researcher told that around 50%
students
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get drug addict during that
gap
period. In conclusion,
gap
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year can have
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number of benefits for the teenagers and it is vital to aware them
about
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the bad habits before taking the
break
from studies.
However
, a
break
period helps them to understand their interest and it will
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to get
appropriate
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