Some students take one year off between finishing school and going to university, in order to travel or to work. Do you think that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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few decades, it has become a debatable issue among the people that having a

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between the institute and university

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is worth doing or not.

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year brings lots of benefits for pupils. But

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will discuss both

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of

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concept in the following paragraphs.

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with,

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have a

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after their school so that they can explore

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different

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around the globe that will fit for their course that they want to get on it.

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, every institute has there

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teaching techniques and environment to make

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learning much easier for the students who

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over there.

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, they can look for the country or city in

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demand

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is higher

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they want to do in their career

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it will be helpful to them to get a job immediately after the completion of

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study

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. In Canada, there is lots of opportunity of IT field people can easily make their career success after entering to

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sector as it

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much higher wage as compared to other jobs and because of

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this young adults

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from the overseas come there just for achieving their goals and

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can be taken as

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for

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. As result, the success rate got increase for the youngster while immediately going to university without getting proper time to think.

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, having a

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year can bring lots of

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from

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studies just because of

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and freedom they got during that particular period. While doing travelling or working can have long term consequences because it is really hard to get back the same concentration that they were having while in schooling. Some of the time,

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going in

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direction as they start attraction towards

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illegal things

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as drugs, theft, many more.

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from the researcher told that around 50%

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get drug addict during that

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period. In conclusion,

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year can have

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number of benefits for the teenagers and it is vital to aware them

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the bad habits before taking the

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from studies.

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, a

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period helps them to understand their interest and it will

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to get

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job.