Computers are being used more and more in education. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages and give your own opinion.

The usage of

computers

has been inclining in

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all aspect of life, particularly in the process of learning and teaching for the

last

few decades. There are certain pros and cons of

this

development and shed light on them in the

next

few paragraphs. I believe that

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far more than

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To begin

with, there are a few drawbacks to computerized

education

programs. Most computer systems are devised for average IQ level

students

such

as they are above the level weak intelligence pupils,

however

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they are below the abilities of genius scholars.

That is

why

education

of extreme IQ level

students

has been

jeoparadized

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jeopardized

.

Moreover

, the utilization of

computers

is widening the

education

gap between the developed countries and the

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nations, as the

poverty stricken

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nations do not have cutting edge information technology facilities.

On the contrary

, there are enormous benefits of the involvement of

computers

in

education

.

First

and foremost,

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education

is far cheaper than human teaching.

Secondly

, it is very convenient for

students

and educators,

for

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the children who opt

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learning do not need to commute to institutes which can save

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valuable time and money for them. In conclusion, even though

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software

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not friendly for weak

students

, they are the

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effective and easiest way to seek knowledge. I think that a

hydrid

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hybrid

model of

education

would be more effective rather than sticking to only one way of teaching either by humans teachers or

computers

.