While some argue that the internet is a blessing as it helps with information, others think that it is not necessary to have such smount of information.What is your opinion?

The internet is a part of modern life, and
avails many benefits, according to some.
, there are some people thinking that
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of an excess amount of
has detrimental effects. In my opinion, to a large
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because the platform is not only unregulated, which
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undue stress but the flooding of
often makes it difficult to choose the right choice as well.
and foremost, online sites are hardly censored by any regulatory body. Since
offers plenty of data on varieties of topics, how to use
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daily life is challenging. To illustrate
, when netizens search about causes of headache, the list ranging from cold to cancer. Eventually, the subscribers tend to find difficulty in deciding what matches his or her actual problems and create mental trauma as well.
, it is obvious that even though
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the information

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creates stress rather than any relief.
, the authenticity of the
is hard to judge. Because of the anonymity of the digital space, users are often fooled.
For instance
, as everyone has smartphones, the owners may pretend to be an expert, utilise virtual media as an instrument to disseminate his or her propaganda. Having dangerous consequences, many consider there must be a limitation when searching the internet to find answers. In conclusion, some people argue that it is unnecessary to reach a wide range of data online. I firmly support the view because the content rarely
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we see
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and it is not easy to pick the most accurate solution.
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