While some argue that the internet is a blessing as it helps with information, others think that it is not necessary to have such smount of information.What is your opinion?
It seems that article use may be incorrect here.
It appears that you are missing a comma after the introductory phrase to a large extent. Consider adding a comma.
The phrase following the intransitive verb agree seems to be missing a preposition. Consider adding one.
It appears that your sentence or clause uses an incorrect form of the verb causing. Consider changing it.
It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.
The noun phrase information seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
The plural verb do does not appear to agree with the singular subject the content. Consider changing the verb form for subject-verb agreement.
The word regulating doesn’t seem to fit this context. Consider replacing it with a different one.
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.
‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.
Examples:
I really want to study but I’m too tired.
I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.
If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.