Nowadays more and more business meetings and business trainings are taking place online. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages.

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
As a way of introduction, there is an increasing number of business meetings and
trainings
Change the wording
training
pieces of training
show examples
taking place online, perhaps
this
has been fostered by the series of
diseases
Fix the agreement mistake
disease
show examples
break-outs and pandemics that the world has witnessed.
This
new trend embodies certain advantages and disadvantages and I subscribe to the notion that the former outweigh the latter for the following reasons that would be discussed in
this
essay.
First
of all, there is no doubt that working via the internet has increased the output of employees and employers alike.
For instance
, in a country like Nigeria, where the average citizen spends
valuable
Add an article
the valuable
a valuable
show examples
amount of hours in traffic every morning (going to the workplace) and evening (returning home), as well as wastes quality time waiting for bus loaders - those who call passengers' attention to the bus at the park - to sluggishly complete the vehicle with the required number of people, workers save considerable aspects of their days when they by-pass these energy-sapping endeavours and channel the conserved hours into getting more sleep and rest needed for
effecient
Correct your spelling
efficient
performance.
In addition
, proponents of the downsides of
this
topic may say that electronic conversations do not allow for folks to see and read
eacother's
Correct your spelling
each other's
expressions clearly,
consequently
, eliminating the human physical connection.
On the contrary
, the internet has allowed more convenience in scheduling appointments.
For example
, as long as all parties are fine with the idea, one can schedule a business proposal gathering for 6:00 am, which is not definitely an odd and unachievable hour for physical gatherings.
Lastly
, engaging through interconnected means has the benefit of saving more money for both recruiters and
reruitees
Correct your spelling
recruiters
. For recruiters, there would be no need for paying rent to use spaces, and the costs of electricity,
airconditioners
Correct your spelling
air conditioners
show examples
, and wastes disposal would be reserved.
Likewise
,
recruitees
Correct your spelling
recruiters
show examples
no longer have a need to lavish on transportation and frequent eat-outs, perhaps,
home-made
Correct your spelling
homemade
show examples
meals would do just fine. In conclusion, several businesses are adopting the modalities of the internet to secure deals and equip members of staff and the benefits exceed the demerits. Ranging from improving productivity to maximizing convenience and reducing operational costs,
this
trend has positively rewarded both business owners and those who render their services to them.
Submitted by ugwokepeace on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: