Some people believe the aim of university education is to help graduates get better jobs. Others believe there are much wider benefits of university education for both individuals and society.

Nowadays, more and more

people

are making the choice to go to

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college. While

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it is occasionally argued that the target of higher education is only to support graduated students to get

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better employment.

However

, in my opinion, there are much wider good impacts not just for

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but

also

for

society

. It is certainly true that one of the main purposes of

university

college is to secure a better

job

. The majority of

people

regularly want to improve their future career prospects and attending

university

is one of the best ways. It’s beneficial for them to be

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in a high position. In today's degree-based

society

, individuals with certifications are more likely

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a well-paid

job

than residents without degrees. A study showed that recruiters tend to

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candidates who studied in universities over those who did not.

Hence

, if a

university

is able to increase

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prospects of its graduates,

people

are naturally inclined to believe that

this

is the only task a

university

is supposed to fulfil.

However

, there are other benefits for both citizens and

society

.

Firstly

, being independent while living away from parents is beneficial for students to develop better social skills and be more likely mature. A case in point is that there are a number of students

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have to leave their homes, live in dormitories, and socialize with new besties.

Therefore

, their maturity and confidence will increase, supporting them to be likely to have

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life.

Secondly

,

society

will benefit from graduates who desire to develop

society

from all sides. We currently live in a very competitive world, so nations need educated

people

to be able to compete and prosper. To conclude, I believe that

although

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main goal of

university

education is to get the best

job

, there are clearly

further

benefits. If we continue to promote and encourage

university

attendance, it will lead to a better future for residents and

society

.