1. Some people believe that having a conversation on a mobile phone in a public or crowded place should be banned. Others feel that we should be able to talk wherever we like. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is considered that talking on a cell
phone
in a public area should be prohibited.
However
, others claim that they can speak at any
place
as they wish.
This
essay will illustrate both
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views and give my opinion on the same.
Firstly
, using the
phone
is becoming a trend in
this
generation.
Although
we have a plethora of electronic gadgets, mobile phones
plays
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significant
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role in every individual's life. Some of them believe that talking in crowded places may disturb others and make an opposite person irritated.
For instance
, speaking loudly over the
phone
which
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distracts others and
make
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them unnecessarily
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effected
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.
Moreover
, despite
of
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conversing on
phone
in public places, they do not think of risks that might happen with them. They can hurt themselves without any notice as they will be busy on calls.
For example
, nowadays people are making video calls while walking, which has a risk of falling down or hurting themselves.
Thus
, answering the calls in a crowded
place
should be restricted.
On the other hand
, other claims that they feel comfortable debating on
phone
in
public
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area which helps them in emergencies. They can speak at any
place
because they have a right to be themselves.
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an example,
phone
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is
basic
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necessity of humans in
this
era. It helps everyone in different ways and
work
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accordingly
to their needs.
Furthermore
, phones are
user friendly
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device which every individual uses it from anywhere without any issues. If an adolescent went to
market
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which is crowded all the time, will call his mother for help. So, phones calls can be taken from any
place
and should not be banned in a particular area. To conclude, upon discussing both the views, I believe that communicating on mobile is a requirement of every human being,
however
, it's
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individual responsibility to know the basic ethics and should avoid talking on calls in crowded places unless its
emergency
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.
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