In the past, when students did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country. Nowadays, they have more opportunity to study abroad. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development.

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modern era,

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the university

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student ratio has increased for the

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two decades dramatically dude

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people get more

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about

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higher studies

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, most

students

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would like to go to study abroad as compared

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to their

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own nation for many reasons.

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essay discusses

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and demerits of

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improvement for the following reasons.

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abroad education opportunities give more advantages to the

students

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as well as the host nation. The main advantage is overseas

pupil

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pupils

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might be gotten a better lifestyle in order to they will satisfy

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their's family needs and wants.

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many developed nations bring a lot of overseas

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pupils

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from other parts of the world

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, they can earn

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massive capital from

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in order to they can use

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money on the hoist state infrastructure developments.

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, globalisation is the main reason for

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modern trend. Certainly,

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trend has some demerits one possible drawback is the

students

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face

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shock when they enter a

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foreign

and they get stress due to they miss their family and friends.

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, according to the survey said that more than 40% of international pupils affect

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three months after they can

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adapt

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the

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new environment as well as culture.

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, another drawback is some person has decided to face suicide because they cannot accept and adopt the new

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atmosphere

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phenomenon has merits as well as demerits. I think

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on the person's mindset and situation. I hope

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trend is conducive for the

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generation to build a

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society.