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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to use printed material such as books and articles to do research than it is to use the internet. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

#books #articles #research #internet #support
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 of the Internet has become fundamental in academic life.
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, some people still argue that it is better to
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 printed material like
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 to do research. I completely disagree with that position because the
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 of the web is eco-friendly, cheaper and has easier access to all kinds of
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.
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, the
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 of physical
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 is against the environment, it has been proved that paper and ink production has a negative impact on the earth. Having said that, the
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 of online resources means an eco-friendly option in which the environment is not harmed.
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, just to complete an article it is necessary to buy or take borrowed multiple
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 and other resources that leave a carbon-print behind,
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,
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 simple online library might supply the same or even, more
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 without having
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 effects.
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, when talking about a bigger source of data and
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, the Internet has a considerable advantage, surfing on an uncountable number of sites on the web allows gathering more
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 than any book available.
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, there are websites
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 as Science Hub, which are helpful to dig into thousands of papers and articles in a couple of minutes, to do the same research in an actual library would take even days.
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, it is cheaper to pay for an online subscription to
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 of those virtual portals than buying
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,
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 membership could cost the same as just
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 book.
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, I could not disagree more with those who think
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 better to research using
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 than the Internet. Online resources are environmentally sustainable,
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, it is both easier and cheaper to collect data and
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 from the web, and
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, there are more sources available online than in any library in the world.
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task response
Your essay effectively presents arguments against the use of printed material for research and supports them with clear examples. To enhance your task response, consider discussing the opposing viewpoint briefly to provide a more balanced argument.
coherence cohesion
Your essay demonstrates good coherence and cohesion with a clear introduction and conclusion. To improve this further, ensure that each paragraph is well-connected to the next, using transitional words and phrases to guide the reader through your arguments.
examples
Strong use of examples to support your points
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