Some people think that sports involving violence, such as boxing, martial arts, should be banned from TV and international sporting competitions. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The problem of some
sports
associate with brutality should be banned or limited so that people would not be interfered with by those negative aspects, has been provoked a wide discussion. In my opinion, it would be wrong to amplify the partial sites and deviate from the original goal of athletics. So, I completely disagree about these suggestions. It is not deniable that some sorts of sport require much strength and force to battle with the opponent in the match,
such
as boxing and fencing.
Although
those
kinds
of
sports
may be violent to some extent in some cases, those athletes know how to stay away from injuries and
also
abided by the competition rules on the
sports
site. The whole aim of
sports
is to compete and present the athletes' professional skills so that they can continue their hobby and career. Only amplify the characters of certain
sports
is too reckless to consider and
also
unfair to those who love these
sports
.
Besides
, boxing and martial arts
also
can remind people to enhance their personal physical ability and enrich their choices when they want to participate in
such
sports
. Those
kinds
of
sports
cannot be equivalent to violent power without negative motivation. Boxing and some strengthening
sports
do not mean bullying or crime that should be banned.
Furthermore
, boxing or
such
kind of
sports
can help the victims or females when they encounter dangerous situations and
also
can protect themselves to not be threatened by some criminals.
Such
kinds
of skills can educate those communities to get rid of some troubles. In conclusion,
although
those
kinds
of sport maybe need more force to complete, it is hard to prove that seems like the same as violent crime or negative affect. Only aggravating the force requirement in a reckless are actually derailing the spirits of
sports
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • combat sports
  • glorification of violence
  • impressionable audiences
  • cultural heritage
  • self-discipline
  • sportsmanship
  • media portrayal
  • regulatory measures
  • censorship
  • psychological impact
  • broadcasting regulations
  • watershed timing
  • advocates and opponents
  • ethical considerations
  • economic implications
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