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It is argued that we are living in a throw-away society: people throw away what they use in daily life, instead of recycling or reusing them. Why has this happened and how to address this issue?

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People
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 are likely to
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products
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 only once
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 of keeping these items for a long time. It is important to understand why
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 throw-away culture has developed and how
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 trend. Consumers today do not keep many
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 for a long period of time because these
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 are not expensive as before. Technological innovations and mass production have reduced the cost of production and improved the productivity of the workforce. Some electronic
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 as mobile phones and computers are now sold at low prices, and
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 is why many
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 would purchase the newest
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 of fixing broken ones. Young
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 particular, prefer to purchase the lasted mobile phones with up-to-date features and throw old ones away. Another reason is that
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 lack environmental awareness.
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 have not yet realized that their ways of life will lead to energy consumption and cause waste as well as pollution. They do not know that household appliances can end up in landfill sites and these non-biodegradable
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 can have a destructive on the environment. If they are aware that recycling can make their lifestyles more sustainable, they will possibly try to reuse
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. As the overconsumption of consumer
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 is pervasive, it is important to take some measures to mitigate
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 problem. The
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 one is to raise environmental awareness, educating
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 to change the ways they
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 and dispose of different
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. Governments can
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 enforce some laws to deter consumers from throwing away
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.
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, the tax penalty can be imposed on the
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 of some disposable
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, including plastic bags, thereby encouraging
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 to
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 eco-friendly alternatives. To summarize,
people
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’s changing
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attitudes
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 toward consumption and price cuts are
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 reasons behind excessive consumption of consumer
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. To address
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 problem successfully, the top priority is to raise
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’s awareness of environmental protection and motivate them to change their lifestyles.

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