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You have just moved into a new home and are plannig to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter . introduce yourself . discribe your plans for the party . invite your neibourhour to come

#home #plannig #party #noise #neighbour #discribe #plans #neibourhour
Dear Haya, I hope
this
 email finds you well, I'
m
 writing
this
 letter to let you know about the big party that I'
m
 planning to have at the weekend. I am Nouf who
is living
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 on the second floor of our building, door number 43. I think that we met each other before at the building entrance at 6p.
m
 in the
last
 Monday. I hope that you will remember me. I want to tell you that the theme of the party is "The 60s and 70s dance",
Therefore
, I'
m
 sure that there will be a huge noise around you. As well, I decided to make a music competition between me and my friends by using
any
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musical tools. I believe that there is so much fun to have and everyone will enjoy
this
 great party. Of course, you are invited to join us at 7p.
m
 on Friday evening, don't forget your magic costume, looking for your reply. NOUF, Best wishes,
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Coherence and cohesion
While your letter is clear and informative, refining your paragraph structure will improve clarity. Try to ensure that each paragraph focuses on a single idea.
Greeting and closing
Your greeting could be more inviting, and it's a good idea to include a friendly closing comment. For example, 'I look forward to meeting you.'
Task achievement
You have addressed all parts of the task, including introducing yourself, explaining the party plans, and inviting your neighbor.
Suitable writing tone
The tone of your letter is appropriate and polite, which shows respect towards your neighbor's feelings.
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