Some people believe that it is better to get advice from old people compared to young people. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your opinion and include relevant examples.

To take any suggestions from accustomed is a superb idea as they are experienced than juvenile. From my

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proposition is completely true. It seems undeniable that too aged people

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a wide range of knowledge as they have. They face a lot of

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. They

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fall

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troubles.

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, they have a solution to defend

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against any

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kind of hazardous

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.

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, they can be able to predict anything where it is not possible to do by younger ones.

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, there are some common issues which could not be accomplished by

old

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public and here youth is the key factor to do

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work.

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, in a job life to persuade anyone it is a good idea to grab too aged

persons

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notion because they have a clear vision about it.

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, new types of technology can be handled by younger

fellow

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where elder people are not suitable.

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, to grab any positions older individual can provide a marvellous thought where it is impossible to take any advice from younger ones.

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,

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incase

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of sustain any device early age person can do it easily where it is not possible by older ones.

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, to grab the executive position of a job sector, accustomed folk can provide easy solutions.

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,

young

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person

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derive

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any electrical devices smoothly where it is not possible by

too

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aged public. In conclusion, old human is the key factor to confer any appropriate opinion.

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, sometimes young can bestow perfect solutions in a certain period.