Some people believe that it is better to get advice from old people compared to young people. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your opinion and include relevant examples.

To take any suggestions from accustomed is a superb idea as they are experienced than juvenile. From my
perspective
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this
proposition is completely true. It seems undeniable that too aged people
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a wide range of knowledge as they have. They face a lot of
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. They
also
fall
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troubles.
As a result
, they have a solution to defend
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kind of hazardous
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.
Thus
, they can be able to predict anything where it is not possible to do by younger ones.
However
, there are some common issues which could not be accomplished by
old
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public and here youth is the key factor to do
this
work.
For instance
, in a job life to persuade anyone it is a good idea to grab too aged
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notion because they have a clear vision about it.
On the contrary
, new types of technology can be handled by younger
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where elder people are not suitable.
Moreover
, to grab any positions older individual can provide a marvellous thought where it is impossible to take any advice from younger ones.
On the other hand
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of sustain any device early age person can do it easily where it is not possible by older ones.
For example
, to grab the executive position of a job sector, accustomed folk can provide easy solutions.
Conversely
,
young
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person
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also
derive
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any electrical devices smoothly where it is not possible by
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aged public. In conclusion, old human is the key factor to confer any appropriate opinion.
However
, sometimes young can bestow perfect solutions in a certain period.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • life experience
  • practical solutions
  • broader perspective
  • wisdom
  • long-term consequences
  • foresight
  • limited life experience
  • contemporary issues
  • rapidly evolving world
  • innovative solutions
  • modern thinking
  • fresh ideas
  • timeless wisdom
  • combination of advice
  • merges experience with contemporary insight
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