Many companies offer their employees the opportunity to work from home. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of working from home for the company. And give your own opinion.

During
this
pandemic situation majority of the physical workstation like multinational co-operation companies, colleges, schools, and so on are changed to residential working mode. I believed that working from
home
is the best choice for the workers. In
this
essay, I would like to discuss the pros and cons of
home
-based working.
Firstly
, As technology has reached every nook and corner of the world, it's helping organizations to adapt to working from
home
and with flexible timings.
This
gives employees to balance their work-life, as there is no commute day involved.
For example
, public travel to reach their office for at least 1-2 hours and often getting tired due to tight schedules and
this
leads to giving less space to the family. To add
further
, eating fresh food at lunch and preferring fruits over junk which is easily available in the office. These are the main points which are certainly giving an edge to working from
home
.
However
, there are negative points as well to
this
idea
such
as the public is not getting connected socially.
For example
, when in the office team goes for lunch together, or have fun activities in breaks while these are getting limited. In case accommodation is smaller, sometimes it’s tough to adjust. Most importantly, people don’t have
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of time and end up working more than usual hours. In my opinion,
home
-based working should be given, but it should be restricted for the number of hours on a monthly or annually basis. So that workers can spend time with their family as well. In conclusion, telecommuting has provided a work-life balance for the employee. But it
also
leads the people to be state of loneliness and they can't have fun while working from the
home
.
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