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SOME EXPERTS BELIEVE THAT IS BETTER FOR CHILDREN TO BEGIN LEARNING A FOREIGN LANGUAGE AT PRIMARY SCHOOL RATHER THAN SECONDARY SCHOOL. DO THE ADVANTAGES OF THIS OUTWEIGH DISADVANTAGES? GIVE REASONS FOR YOUR ANSWER AND INCLUDE ANY RELEVANT EXAMPLE FROM YOUR OWN KNOWLEDGE OR EXPERIENCE

#experts #children #language #school #outweigh
People have different views about whether children should start learning
foreign
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language
 at a primary
school
 rather than secondary
school
. I believe
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secondary
scondary
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a scondary
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school
 is best. There are
many
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reason
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reasons
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 why some experts recommended primary
school
 for children to learn
foreign
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a foreign
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lanuage
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language
languages
.
First
 of
all
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 they believe kids should start learning
new
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a new
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language
 from there because
on
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 that stage their mind is fresh and they can
easilly
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easily
 catch almost all
lesson
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lessons
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.
Besides
,
on
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 that stage the number of
academic
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subject
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subjects
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 not too hard and in many countries most of the
school
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schools
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 do not take
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the exam
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exam
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exams
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. So kids
are learn
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 with fun.
That is
 why some
expers
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experts
 believe a primary
school
 is the best place where children should start learning
foreign
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language
.
Althrough
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Although
 it has some negative
impact
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impacts
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also
.
For example
, one of my little
brother
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brothers
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 start learning
learning
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english
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 as a
second
language
as a result
 he is not good
on
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at
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 his mother
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tone
tuned
. Whereas
i
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 believe secondary
school
 is the best option for learning foreign. As we know at a secondary
school
 lots of qualified teacher work for
childern's
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children's
 skill development. So that, students can learn
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grammar
gramme
grammer
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the grammer
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 of that particular
language
.
Similarly
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 when they move to secondary
school
 from primary
school
, they realise the importance of learning
foreign
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a foreign
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language
.
on
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 that
stage
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 they create
future
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a future
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 plan. So that they can choose
exect
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exact
exactly
language
 which
language
 can
useful
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 in
carrier
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, when
i
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was create
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 a
paln
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plan
for
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to
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learn
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English
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language
firstly
i
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 try to gain knowledge
by
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 various books, But
i
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was not find
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did not find
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 any proper way.
On
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 the meane time, one of my
teacher
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teachers
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 helped me and my classmate was
also
 helpful. In our
school
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 an
english
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language
 club
aslo
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also
 provide help for
begineers
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beginners
. In conclusion, these two way is
similary
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similarly
similar
importat
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important
.People can pick both twos but secondary
school
 is more productive.
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