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In many countries the level of crime is increasing and crimes are becoming more violent. Why do you think this is and what can be done about it?

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The crime rate has not only been inclining but the intensity of wrongdoing has
also
 been increasing all over the world for the
last
 few decades. There are multiple reasons for
this
 development that are not easy to deal with. I believe that there are many pragmatic solutions available in order to reduce violent
crimes
.
To begin
 with, there are enormous causes for a boom in criminal attitudes. Unemployment is a major reason, as people need money to fulfil their daily requirements if they are unable to earn that amount,
then
 they commit
crimes
 to get it.
For example
, if a skilled man is not able to get a job
then
 he would use his skill in a bad way to earn his bread and butter.
Furthermore
, with the recent advancements in communication particularly in electronic media and social media, criminals learn new ways
such
 as documentaries about
crimes
 on different TV channels demonstrate how
crimes
 happen and the people who have malicious intentions misuse them. Regarding the remedies of booming the crime rate, everyone in society has to play their roles.
First
 and foremost, governments must take solid measures to decrease joblessness,,
meanwhile
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 they should
also
 provide financial assistance for the citizens who have low income.
Secondly
, the media need to run various campaigns against
felony
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 rather than promoting them in programs. Authorities should have a strict check on the material which is broadcasted on TV shows.
Last
 but not the least, rehabilitation facilities should be enhanced for habitual criminals which help them to come of violent psychology. In conclusion, I believe that unemployment and easy access to the criminal literature are major causative factors for the robust increase in the crime rate.
On the other hand
, social and economic reforms can halt
this
 progression.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • crime rate
  • violent crimes
  • socioeconomic factors
  • law enforcement
  • technology
  • education
  • employment
  • drug abuse
  • alcohol abuse
  • poverty
  • inequality
  • effectiveness
  • investing
  • job creation
  • social support
  • community engagement
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