Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, online shopping has been more and more popular. Some
people
think Use synonyms
this
shopping method gives more benefits to them than Linking Words
the
disadvantages. I will explain why the advantages of online shopping Correct article usage
apply
is
outweigh the Change the verb form
are
disvantages
with my own experiences.
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disadvantages
First
of all, online shopping is more Linking Words
time
saving and cheaper than Use synonyms
the
traditional shopping Correct article usage
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with
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without
no
doubt. Take planning an out-bound trip as an example, in the past, Correct determiner usage
a
people
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needs
to go to the travel agents to get their flight Change the verb form
need
tickects
, accommodations or theme park tickets, which might Correct your spelling
tickets
takes
a half day Change the verb form
take
time
to manage all of them, Use synonyms
however
, with online shopping, I could finish all the ticket and hotel bookings within an hour. Linking Words
Also
, there would be Linking Words
less
options from the travel agents, since they have contracts to certain hotels or airlines, Change the quantifier
fewer
therefore
they normally have a fixed price. Linking Words
In contrast
, there are many platforms offering different prices, brands and discounts for booking Linking Words
the
tickets and hotel rooms online. We can always find a cheaper option when we have Correct article usage
apply
hundreds
options to choose Add the preposition
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with
. Change preposition
from
Although
online platform seems not reliable, there Linking Words
are
more and more regulation on them to Change the verb form
is
protet
the customer Correct your spelling
protect
protest
alreeady
. Online shopping offers more options in seconds and allows us to choose more Correct your spelling
already
time
saving, cheaper and easier.
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Besides
, traditional shopping is not friendly to everyone. Linking Words
People
live in Use synonyms
rural
area usually need to drive about half an hour or more to the shopping nearby or even just the grocery store. Most of them are elderly, they are not able to go too far from home or age care centre, shopping becomes difficult to them. Add an article
the rural
a rural
Also
, for the shift worker, they may not able to go to shopping in the trading hours. With online shopping, those Linking Words
problem
solved. There will be no more Fix the agreement mistake
problems
time
limits and distance will not be a problem Use synonyms
any more
. Correct your spelling
anymore
People
would say it is hard to shop without seeing the real products, Use synonyms
however
, in my opinion, Linking Words
this
is just a habit and when Linking Words
people
used to do online shopping, there are no needs to Use synonyms
buty
a product after seeing the real one. With the advance of technology, Correct your spelling
buy
people
can easily search and buy things that they want and need. So why bother to wake up early and drive more than Use synonyms
half
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half-hour
hour
to go shopping?
There are more examples to support online shopping has more advantages and Correct article usage
an hour
disavantages
but most Correct your spelling
disadvantages
impotantly
, Correct your spelling
importantly
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time saving
has been essential Add a hyphen
time-saving
to
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for
people
to make a decision. Use synonyms
On the other hand
, online shopping offers lower Linking Words
cost
to Fix the agreement mistake
costs
people
. These two main reasons enough to convince Use synonyms
people
the Use synonyms
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shopping has more Correct your spelling
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benifits
than Correct your spelling
benefits
the
disadvantages.Correct article usage
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