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Some schools have restricted the use of mobile phones. Is this a positive development or a negative one? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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In modern times and a fast-changing world, it is common in many countries for children to have mobile
phones
.
Although
 some schools and universities are in favour, others seem to restrict their
use
. In my opinion,
that is
 a positive impact not only academically, but
also
 physically and socially too. Restricting phone
use
 in the classroom itself can improve learning. Without these devices,
students
 and teachers will have far fewer distractions and can pay more attention to the curriculum. When
students
 have their
phones
 they tend to easily lose focus with the irresistible urge to be online and constantly checking for texts or social media updates.
For example
, it is observed that
students
 usually
use
 their
handphone
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handphones
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 to update their status on social media websites and share
real time
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 information causing a distraction to study.
Moreover
, minimal
use
 of
phones
 will help them to improve their
wellbeing
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 both physically and socially. With less contact with
phones
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 they can spend more time in outdoor activities, which will make them fit and
also
 get to spend more time with friends. When
students
 learn any sport at an early age, they
also
 learn how to be disciplined, organized and competitive, which is
a
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universal
characteristics
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 for
child's
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 development.
Furthermore
, they will have added advantage to interact in person and make new friends. So, all in restriction of
phones
 will help
students
 in many areas and will develop them for future challenges.
For instance
, due to
unavailability
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 of
phone
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the phone
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 during my childhood days, I
use
 to engage more in
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extracurricular
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extra curricular
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 activities making me physically fit. In conclusion, I strongly agree that
school
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 should restrict all
kind
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kinds
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 of cellular devices in order to help
students
 to excel in
education
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 field.
Also
, it improves the quality of life, physically and socially.
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