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Difference between countries become less qvident each year.Nowadays, all over the world people share the same fashion,advertisement,brands,eating habits and tv channels.Do the advantages of the trend outweigh the disadvantages?

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This
 is the age of globalization, where masses attracted to other nations
culture
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 and
tradition
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. Common folk
also
 follow the various countries products,fashion,media and many more.There are
plethora
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 of merits owing to
this
 situation.
Consequently
, it can
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 that affirmatives overweigh
negatives
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. And the reasons for my inclination are articulated in
trail
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 paragraphs.
First
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 and foremost reason to justify my ideology is that, if
latest
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 fashion and media shared by people, they
influences
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the
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western culture.
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,they know more about different nations and it is beneficial for some countries. To exemplify, by sharing
of
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media,
human kind
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humankind
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 became more aware
about
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of
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 their rules and some social prejudices
such
 as sati, dowry and female foeticide are removed from
indian
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Indian
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 society, Due to
this
, women role has been changed from social to
prefessional
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professional
. Another relevant argument to support my perception is that
,
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 mankind
become
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 more conscious about fashion and
also
 increase
in
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the
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job opportunities.
As a result
, it
is indirectly increase
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 the economical growth of nations.It is win-win
situationfor
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situation for
 different countries.
Furthermore
, sharing each and every
things
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 might be a
possibilities
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 of
strong
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 friendship of nation and curtail the war distract.
Inspite
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 of
it's
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 positives, it has
it;s
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 own ramifications.
To begin
 with, people become more attracted
towards
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 foreign culture.
Hence
, youngsters addicted
tto
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to
 additives
such
 as smoking and drug.They
also
 tend to enter
in
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 illegal activity like crime.
Moreover
, because of excessive intake of
fastfood
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fast food
, people attracted to eat
this kinds
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 of
fastfood
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fast food
 which is not hygienic and leads to chronic diseases
such
 as obesity,diabetes and heart ailments. On the close scrutiny, I conclude that
pros
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 outweigh the cons. But the elimination of
junkfood
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junk food
 from our lives is not pragmatic.So, In order to solve
this
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 issues government should take strict actions against
fastfood
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fast food
 which is not good for
health
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the health
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 of
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populace
populase
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.
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