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In many parts of the world there is continuous coverage of sport on television. some people believe this discourages the young from taking part in any sport themselves. Discuss this view and give your own opinion.

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Whether live
sports
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 on television change youngsters from actually playing
sports
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 in real life is a controversial issue. In my opinion, participating in different
sports
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 is more useful than only enjoying it on television, though watching a few games are good for all
people
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. Beyond all question,
TV
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sports
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 live has some benefits for young
people
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 and the most important one is that encourage them to love
sports
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. Many
sports
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 channels broadcast non-stop sporting competitions and young
people
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 may have passions for numerous
sports
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. They are more likely to
try
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 play outdoor games when they are interested in certain
sports
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 that are played on
TV
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. So that，Non-stop
sports
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 on
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 in a way encourage youngsters from becoming sportsmen themselves.
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，Even though young
people
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 are interested in some
sports
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，they still hardly participate in outdoor
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. They prefer
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 channels as part of entertainment rather than encouragement for their sportsmanship skill development. These
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 lives might become a new reason that they can stay at home all day. To conclude, the fundamental issue is whether the young treat themselves as spectators or athletes. In the case of the teens imagine themselves as spectators, television may dishearten them from taking part in
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 but reversely, it may encourage the youth to start engaging in
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 too.
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