in some countries ,owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

Nowadays having a

house

is essential for every person.

People

from different countries consider that possessing a

home

is more important than renting

one

.

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one

might be an opportunity for certain

people

and provide whether

favorable

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or

unfavorable

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condition

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. Currently, all inhabitants need a place where to live . In

this

case

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there are two options :to buy a

house

or to rent

one

. For a certain number of

people

purchasing a

house

or a flat is more convenient .

Firstly

, that place

remain

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yours for the rest of your life.

Secondly

,

design

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of the

house

depends on your aspiration and owning a

home

is more pleasant, and comfortable than renting .

Therefore

,

accordingly

of a various amount of

people

from different countries to have your own

home

has greater importance than renting a residence. These days buying a

house

has

became

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a trend throughout the world and

such

a development has a positive and negative influence. On

one

hand

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owning a

house

is much more convenient and stable for individuals ,

nevertheless

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you cannot move out without any problem ,

for

example

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another city .While it is true to say that possessing a

home

has more positive influence actually that kind of tendency has a negative

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affect

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for

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renting agency and their budget .From my point of

view

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purchasing has more

advantageous

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,the particular reason for

circumstance

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the circumstance

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is that the process is more worthwhile and remain in your soul forever. Taking everything into consideration, several

people

presume that

to buy

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buying

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a

house

is more precious than renting a

home

. In my

opinion

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indeed the

first

option, buying a place is the most important thing that

a

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humans should do in their life.