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Many products that we buy are made in other countries. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this and give your opinion.

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•There are numbers of men and women who insist on the administration to allocate funds for
space
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exploration
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 while some believe that there are more important projects that need to be addressed.
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this
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 essay will discuss the reasons for
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 voyaging and
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, the detrimental effects of allocating funds for
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exploration
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. •On the one hand,
space
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 is a mysterious place, that requires large amounts of money to explore. The government and many people all over the
world
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 think that there are other kinds of species that dwell in the far galaxy. They believe that providing funds for
space
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exploration
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 is needed and vital in developing the future of our own planet.
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, a report from NASA in 2016 revealed that there is a government-funded scheme that allocates more than 30% of taxpayers money to
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space
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exploration
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 programmes. •
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, building a spacecraft that can travel through
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 needs millions of dollars.
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 can dissolve the budget set aside for more important projects that could help the
world
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 to improve its condition. The time that they spend on
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exploration
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 is no joke, as many astronauts often stay 10 years or more to study the galaxy and since that’s unfamiliar territory the chances of experiencing malfunctions or encountering danger are far greater.
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, an article by
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 Explorer in 2016 revealed that only 3 out of 10 of Russia’s
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 explorations missions are successful. • In my opinion, I believe that
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 it is interesting to know if there are other forms of life living on the other planets, we should give our time and invest our money into more important problems that our
world
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 is experiencing now. Problems like famine, climate change and population explosion are the ones that we need to address in order to heal the earth.
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, a study by the
World
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 Wildlife Fund in 2017 discovered that by the year 2030 more and more species of animals will be extinct if people do not change their lifestyle and habits. • In conclusion,
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exploration
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 can wait. We should
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 take care and heal the only planet that we are living in for
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 is the only place that we are sure can sustain our race.
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