In the future, it may be necessary for us to live on another planet. For this reason, some people believe that we should spend money now researching planets that could be a possible home, such as Mars. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

I can say I have an ambiguous opinion on
this
; to some degree, we should preserve our
planet
. We should
also
look for opportunities, whereas
humans
can evolve and have relied on the future. For the dream to reach Mars is already in progress, Nasa and Space-x are already doing so much research to gather data on mars. Many scientists are investing their time to check the data and research how we can make human life comfortable on a strange
planet
. The Space-x already announced that by 2024 they are planning to start sending
humans
to Mars. For saving the
earth
,
this
is the most important thing to do. After all, mother
earth
is giving us the space to live and food, and we should always be grateful to it, and we should always invest our capabilities to tackle the issues that we face environmentally. Recent news has appeared that the USA and Canada observed the highest peak of heat nowadays, which broke the record of over 84 years; many scientists and environmental psychologists believed that
this
is due to the human population and in that biggest factor might have been causing
this
by industrial waste and air pollution,
this
is very high time now that we can think of our home and government should
also
encourage or introduce laws which will be in favour of preserving the
earth
. I think to some extent, the work is already in progress for both of the topics. Almost all the governments are focusing on green energy and looking for techniques that will help to reduce pollution by spreading awareness to save our mother
earth
. On another side, there are some great personalities who are doing the best work to evolve
humans
and researching for living on Mars. If we see most of our generation are cautious above preserving our environment by doing lots of social activities and
also
doing the meetup via social media and volunteering in NGOs, while on another side the same generation is excited about the new
planet
especially Mars and always curious to know what are the possibilities to reach there. If we see the examples, we see there are many
things
that are going on for saving the
planet
. There are many activities like saving trees, reducing plastic bag usage, and using environmentally friendly vehicles; we are on our way to having the electric vehicle, which will reduce the air pollution caused by the current usage of motor vehicles. The governments are investing in green energy highly nowadays,
such
as solar energy and many more
things
. Let's think practically both
things
are of utmost necessity in the current scenario.
Humans
are the top most intelligent species on
this
planet
than any other species that have been discovered. We should use
this
intelligence to evolve and continue evolving so that we can always have a solution for every universal challenge that might come on us; But if we observe from the past, we can see that we are slightly slowed down our progress for evolving as species, we no longer know how pyramids of Egypt have been made and so many mysterious
things
that might have happened millions of years ago and scientists are still scratching their heads to resolve how it was made. So
humans
should always use their brains to service humanity and fulfil the service of human life. So going to Mars is our future and we should always chase and saving the
earth
is our present. We should always preserve it, and we all know the present has the priority of the future in any case.
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