Many people nowadays spend a large part of their free time using a smartphone What do you think are the reasons for this? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Mobile phones have become

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part of the lives of human beings.In

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present day

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and age, a multitude of

people

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sticking to their mobile devices and spending most of their spare

time

with

it

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. The aim of

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essay is to review the causes

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this

addiction and analyse whether

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is beneficial or not. The

fundamnetal

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fundamental

cause for the population getting glued to their phones is

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of companions.That means in

this

busy world, no one is free and

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mere

time

to talk and mingle with others.

Hence

, individuals are getting solace through these digital devices.

Secondly

, the applications in these devices make them

addcited

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addicted

and consume their

time

.

For example

, social media websites like Whatsapp and Facebook contain a

lot

of information and the folks continuously check the messages from their friends and spend a

lot

of

time

there.

Therefore

, human beings are getting too much engaged with these

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smartphones

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smart phones

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. Even though

people

are able to mingle with their friends and share a

lot

of

infromation

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information

, they are facing a

lot

of health problems due to

this

increased screen

time

.

For instance

, human eyes are so

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sensitive

and the blue light that comes from the mobile is not all good for our eyes and

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worldwide research has shown that

morethan

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more than

five hours of engagement to a digital device in a day can

severly

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severely

impact the retina of the eye.

Therefore

,

people

should restrict their

time

with these gadgets. To conclude, the essay has discussed the reasons behind the habit of

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the phone in

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people

and had

also

outlined the drawbacks of the usage.Overall,

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practice is shown to give

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negative impact on

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humans

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health.