In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it a valuable work experience, which is important for learning and taking responsibility. What is your opinion

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are encouraged to

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for

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in their early

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. Some

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argue that

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could be a relevant

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experience for

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could help them to be a responsible

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. I believe that

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could learn to be accountable and could know the importance of

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, young learners could understand the importance of responsibility.

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because

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extremely essential skill grooms the

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to be a mature

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in the future.

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imperative quality is required everywhere in today's world.

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, the New generation learns to handle and carry the necessary

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for themselves.

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, in India, most

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are enrolled in pre-mature stage learning schools. While they are in those institutions, they learn various qualities which help them to achieve great heights in

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coming

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, young ones learn the importance of

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and

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know how to manage it for themselves. As when a

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is in adult

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they already are well-prepared to handle their financial condition.

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, they emerge as

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who is successful financially.

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, in the region of Mumbai. Several growing

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are engaged in a paid social working activities where their salary is pre-decided. While they receive their salary they are taught to manage the

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. In conclusion, qualities relating to accountability and responsibility are learned if

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are influenced to join paid

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in their initial

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believe that young ones learn to save and spend their funds. As these are important to have a good and sensational life.