Some people believe that the best way to control accidents on city street is to lower the speed limit but other think that are more important issue is that need attention before roads can be safe .Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

In today's world ,
people
are divided on the basis of
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speed
limit
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. Many
people
argue that
speed
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limit
should be lower weather others opine that
government
should focus on
condition
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the condition
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of the roads .
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will
discuss both
the
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views in upcoming paragraphs. The
first
and foremost reason to support my ideology is that
,
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speed is the most
an
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active reason why
number
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the number
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of
accidents
increasing. The number of vehicles
also
grow day by day.
Moreover
,
government
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the government
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should make a
limit
for
different
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a different
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vehicle
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vehicles
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.
People
also
maintained speed
limit
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limits
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to avoid serious
accidents
.
For example
, in 2015 The
government
of The
nepal
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made a rule that for all
vehicle
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vehicles
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there is maximum speed is 60 km/ hr and due to that ,
last
year there
are
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50
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a 50
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% decrease in serious
accidents
.
Furthermore
,
speed
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a speed
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limit
should be there for
smooth
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the smooth
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functioning of the traffic system .
In addition
, many
driver
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drivers
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do not follow the rules and regulations of the traffic and sometimes they look into phones and texting while
,
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driving so for that
government
should impose penalties to improving
this
problem.
On the other hand
, many roads of
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the street
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street
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streets
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are not well constructed so
this
is
also
a reason
of
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the
accidents
.
Firstly
, authorities should make
road
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roads
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well and managed the parking space in every street so the number of
accidents
will
reduced
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.
For example
, in 2018 total
25,000
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people
died due to
the
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road condition.
Secondly
, it is
also
a responsibility of
government
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the government
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that they have to give proper
fund
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funds
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for the development of the roads. In conclusion, city
street
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streets
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need to be safer for everyone and speeding and drivers are the
peoblems
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problems
problem
. The speed
limit
should
be impose
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for all and
government
should take strict steps against those who break the rules of traffic.
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