More people now work overseas. What are the reasons why people are doing so? Does this trend have more advantages or disadvantages? Provide specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

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Working abroad has now become very common among people particularly in
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developing
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. I feel
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I will discuss the pros and cons of it with
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two decades, there is
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increase in working in developed
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because of the change
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globalization brought in. Working abroad, gives more exposure,
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salary and better living culture.
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, working in
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nation brings you
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lots of
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opportunities
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, people working in advanced economies, tend to get four or five times
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the salary they
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to get in
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developing
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, they could give better education, social life to
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comparing the developing nations.
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, working overseas has some cons attached to it. Sometimes, people will have to stay far from
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family, friends and neighbourhood.
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, they would need to
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to the new culture which might make them feel unsecured or isolated at times.
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, if you are travelling to a country in which you do not know
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local language and it kind of makes it cumbersome for them to interact with
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and locals. To conclude, it has more merits than demerits to work in developed nations as it brings you more prospects, money and better
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living hood
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. The cons are something that we need to overcome by taking appropriate measures to have a happy living
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abroad.
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