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Some people think that art is an essential subject for children at school while others think it is a waste of time. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

#people #art #children #school #waste #time
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Talents of
children
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 lie not only in reading, writing and memorizing concepts. The tastes in developing ideas and creating new arts should be quantified in schools for the proper physical and mental growth of
children
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. The traditional concept of teaching
art
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 as a
subject
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 plays an integral role in forming talented generations.
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, there are those who complain it consume considerable study time of the school
children
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.
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 the views are discussed as follows. On the one hand, learning and practising
art
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 requires immense concentration, dedication and determination.
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 seems to be the prime reason behind the addition of
art
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 as a
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 in a number of educational institutions.
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, practising
art
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 forms like mural painting has proven to improve student concentration and it is one of the best relaxation techniques. Mural
art
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 involves intricate lines and curves that improve the hand flexibility of
children
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 who practice it. Apart from the benefit of mental relaxation,
students
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 grow well-disciplined and physically fit by practising arts
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 as dance and aerobics on a daily basis.
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,
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 the
parents
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 and teachers, intend to maintain an
art
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subject
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 in the school curriculum for
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 the academic and fitness progression of the
students
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. Sometimes, many
parents
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 neglect the aforementioned benefits knowingly or unknowingly and claim it as a wastage of time. The reason might be some curious
children
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 may spend a considerable amount of time solely on the artwork without occupying themselves for study purposes.
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 can affect their academic performance and
parents
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 are worried about failures in the formal assessments.
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,
art
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-based jobs or careers do not offer extreme incomes and job insecurity sustains unless they become famous. Professional and technical courses can aid in securing well-paid jobs easily and
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 some people consider replacing
art
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 subjects with courses of
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 types. To summarize, I feel the outcomes of studying
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 subjects always outweigh and the best is to never eliminate any
art
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subject
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 from the school syllabus. There are
students
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 who are capable of pursuing
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 career and
art
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 talents parallelly and
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 multi-tasking capabilities should be encouraged by
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 and trainers for their career development rather than compelling
students
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 to concentrate only on certain subjects.
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  • problem-solving
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