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Using a computer everyday can have more negative than positive effects on your children. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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The development of technology
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such
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 lead to
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 increase in the number of
children
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 use of it.
Although
 there is an argument that spending most of the time on
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 can pose a detrimental impact on
children
, I strongly believe that it is beneficial and no harmful to
children
. I will thoroughly present my view in the following part.
First
 of all, it is undeniable that the merits of
computer
 provide for
children
 are really enormous. As
high-tech
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 tool,
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the computer
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computer
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 can bring an ideal education atmosphere for
children
.
For example
,they easily do some research about some particular things which are still mysterious
Moreover
,
childeren
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children
 can find more intriguing videos on youtube or any kind of entertainment website which help them expand their own knowledge horizon in
this
 little world. In
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addition
, the variety of sources on the internet is
also
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espcieally
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especially
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the unknown
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this
 planet. It is widely proved and accepted by both parents and teachers
On the other hand
, the negative effect of
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 is something unavoidable. Most
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children
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 spend their time
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playing
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computer
 games or watching movies on the internet which lead to some bad consequences
such
 as lose interest in
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 and they can easily get
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, they can
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 their interaction and connection
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 their family members, friends and some other close-knit relationships. Using
computer
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 for many hours can
also
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both physical and mental issues which cause some negative repercussions in a long run. In conclusion, there are always both sides
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 in
this
 world and using
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 is not an unacceptance.
However
, from my view, I always believe that the merits of
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outweight
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outweigh
 its demerits.
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Screen time
  • Sedentary lifestyle
  • Physical inactivity
  • Cognitive development
  • Internet addiction
  • Cyberbullying
  • Inappropriate content
  • Digital literacy
  • Virtual learning environments
  • Parental controls
  • Moderation
  • Online safety
  • Tech-savvy
  • E-learning
  • Information technology
  • Eye strain
  • Social skills
  • Multitasking
  • Interactive education
  • Health repercussions
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