You are living in a city in a foreign country, and a friend from your home country is soon coming to visit you for several days. Write an email to your friend, asking him or her to bring some things from home which you need saying why you need them making arrangements to meet Begin your letter ‘Dear --------’
Dear Ashpreet,
I hope you are in good health and happiness. I am very glad to hear that you are visiting Canada for a month. Actually, I need a favour from you, I hope you don't mind
Firstly
, I wanted to ask if you have little space in your luggage as last
time when I visited India. Unfortunately, I forgot my
some winter clothes that I needed Correct pronoun usage
apply
thesedays
. As you know, it is very Correct your spelling
these days
cod
Correct your spelling
cold
in
here, I will Change preposition
apply
also
suggest you to
bring some extra winter clothing. Remove the particle
apply
Moreover
, let me know when you are arriving here including date
and time if possible your flight Correct article usage
the date
numnber
. I will come pick you up from Correct your spelling
number
airport
. SinceAdd an article
the airport
,
I have Remove the comma
apply
special
arrangement for you near my home
I will be very happy to see you after so long. Once again do not forget to share the details. So see you soon, have good wishes for your family and you.
Warm wishesCorrect article usage
a special
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task achievement
Make sure to provide a more detailed list of the winter clothes you need. This will make it easier for your friend to understand and help.
coherence cohesion
Consider checking your letter for minor spelling and grammatical mistakes to enhance clarity and readability.
task achievement
The letter successfully addresses the main points of asking for items, explaining their need, and arranging a meeting.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing are warm and friendly, setting a positive tone for the letter.
task achievement
The letter maintains a suitable tone that is appropriate for writing to a friend.