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While some people think that plastic should be banned, others not. Do you agree or disagree?

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In the contemporary era, there are many kinds of
pollution
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 in the world.
Plastic
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 is
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one
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 of the dangerous pollutions for the global. Some
people
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 think that
plastic
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 should be banned and the other side thinks that it should not be banned. I agree with
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 topic that
plastic
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 should be banned and will discuss it in the upcoming paragraph. In order to justify my point of ,view there is the main problem in the world
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pollution
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. The
pollution
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 is increasing day by day. Which is extremely harmful to the public. There are tremendous problems related to human health increasing by
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. When
people
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 are using
plastic
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 bags and after that they through on the road.
Plastic
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 bags create harmful diseases. Is that a kidney problem? There is
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 gas that coming from
plastic
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 and that directly attack
people
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 kidneys.
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, The
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 does not finish easily. It is dangerous for animals and birds.
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, In ,India there are many animals living on the footpath and eating food from garbage as well as they eat that bags
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 which is stuck in their body.
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, there is
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 famous dictum "
one
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 man's trash is another man's treasure"
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, some
people
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 think it should not ban because it's cheap and merely available everywhere. In ,conclusion it can be said that as "every coin has two sides" in the same way
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 topic has both sides, but my point of view is more paramount for me. I agree with my view and follow my rules.
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