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Solar energy is becoming more and more popular as a source of household energy in many countries around the world. Why is this? What are the advantages and disadvantages of solar energy?

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Nowadays, people are aware of the consequences of fossil fuels. So, they prefer to use solar
energy
 in household activities in many nations.
This
 is a cheaper and easily available source of
energy
.
This
 essay will discuss the pros and cons of using solar
energy
 in the forthcoming paragraphs.
To begin
 with, there are a couple of advantages of using solar
energy
 at home.
Firstly
, It is a cheaper source of
energy
. There is a single time need to set up
panels
 and
then
 there is no cost of getting
energy
. People do not need to pay electricity bills. It
also
 saves money.
Secondly
, Its maintenance cost is
also
 less. One can take benefits as long as he wishes.
For instance
, In my society , almost every home has solar
panels
 on the roofs which are really greater benefits for people and the country. It
also
 saves non-renewable resources.
On the contrary
, there are
also
 some disadvantages
such
 as climate issues and labour to install solar
panels
.
Firstly
, in some countries, there is more cold weather than sunny days. It does not work in the rainy season.
Secondly
, there is a need for a special person to install solar
panels
. Sometimes it is difficult to find the labour to install solar
energy
.
For instance
, in northern England, there is not possible to install solar
energy
 because there is always rainy weather. To conclude, it is a very good approach to install solar
panels
 all over the world. It is a cheaper and easily available source of
energy
.
On the other hand
, it does not work in those countries which have weather issues and
also
 difficult to find labour.
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Renewable energy
  • Subsidies
  • Tax credits
  • Photovoltaic cells
  • Efficiency
  • Off-grid
  • Carbon footprint
  • Climate change
  • Initial investment
  • Energy security
  • Sustainability
  • Decarbonization
  • Grid parity
  • Feed-in tariff
  • Energy storage systems
  • Payback period
  • Net metering
  • Silicon panels
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