universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
Some people believe that equal numbers of
men
and women
should be attracted to the same subject by universities
. While
I agree with this
assertion, I believe some subjects
are not appropriate for a particular gender. On the one hand, in my opinion, equal numbers of men
and women
should be accepted in some subjects
. Firstly
, there are a lot of genius people that
did not have a chance to get academic certification from Correct pronoun usage
who
universities
due to
a lack of equality in entering universities
. Also
, nowadays, many doctors and engineers are female, and they are so successful even more than males. So, if females have the same right
, they will show their abilities. Fix the agreement mistake
rights
Finally
, society has accepted that men
and women
must have the same right
in many areas. Fix the agreement mistake
rights
For example
, nowadays, lots of men
stay at home and do households
, and their wives are working out of the home. Fix the agreement mistake
household
On the other hand
, I believe that some jobs are more appropriate for women
like nursing. This
the
job requires a lot of patience and accuracy, and Correct article usage
apply
i
think females deserve to have Change the capitalization
I
this
job compared to males. By contrast
, some subjects
like civil engineering is
so exhausting and difficult and need a strong physique, and of course, Change the verb form
are
men
are more appropriate for this
job. In conclusion, I agree that equal numbers of men
and women
should be entered some
Change preposition
into some
subjects
by universities
, but several subjects
that
is
not for either man and Change the verb form
are
women
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
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