Studies suggest that many teenagers these days prefer socialising online to meeting one another in person. Why do you think this is the case? What measures could be taken to encourage teenagers to spend more time meeting one another in person? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Mainly the teenagers never prefer socialising online because they need to make a contact with each other and interact
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pandemic not allowed to make contact with each other, so the teenagers were socialising online. What socialising means is the way they
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their social media
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The main effect of using a mobile was all of them can be distracted from their studies and goals. During the current situation all were collaborating through online features were
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technology made like teams, zoom, Google meet. From those ,platforms we can call virtually. Where we can learn a lot of
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place by not moving. By meeting virtually we can do the projects and chit chat with friends. The war we were in, keeps us at home ,
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we stopped our work and studies. BY using the latest techniques we all meeting virtually. The measures that had to be taken by a teenager was, use mobile for their education and entertainment
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only not much more. In online we found everything we need, we can socializing learn and joy and more like teaching new
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from others. We were meeting unknown people, they
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in exchanging languages from that software we all learn new
things
daily.
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of my friends thought that meeting socialises in the very version of communication that were Omegle, clubhouse, Instagram , Facebook and many more like these.
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  • digital detox
  • tech-free zones
  • mentorship programs
  • real-world interactions
  • face-to-face settings
  • in-person participation
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