Some people feel that the design of newly constructed buildings in big cities should be controlled by governments. Others believe those who finance the construction of a building should be free to design it as they see fit.

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As a matter of fact,in
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day and age, there are some actual issues. One of them,who observes to construct jobs, government or by those who carry out the design of the building. It seems to me that there are both advantages and disadvantages on
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,let us take a look at the advantages. More people accept that the role of the country is crucial in each job. One of them watches realizing the rule of the obligation. Many people claim that if the country doesn't realize control more actions will
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rise. As far as I understand,probably the government doesn't control and the companies will start to create what they desire. Maybe
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sounds excellent,
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afterwards some actions might establish as an example the company utilizes wrong materials,maybe to establish burnings. Recently,
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situation occurred in Azerbaijan.
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,I believe that if they watch out, the design will be constructed better than the others.
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, being illustrated the pictures of ancient customs,garments and so on.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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