In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.

Exposure to commercial life and

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plays

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role in grooming youngsters.

Therefore

, it is recommended for students to have

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12-months of working or

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experience before starting university.

However

, there are some pros and cons of having

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experience which

are

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discussed in

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essay. There are many benefits of working at

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age like division of

wok

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work

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, public dealing, understanding of customer needs, conflict resolution and learn tactics about grabbing

attention

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of

boss

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etc. While working, one has to follow routines and some pre-defined rules which help to develop a sense of responsibility and ownership.

In addition

, travelling opens the idea of thinking by exploring new places and going through unseen circumstances.

For instance

, if you have to assemble a tent in

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then

you will learn the importance of coordination, skills and experience.

However

, it is necessary to keep a close eye on your adolescent if he is working or travelling alone because

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there is a huge possibility that he could be trapped easily. Newly developed adults are not enough educated and

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of the consequences of little mistakes.

Moreover

, they can be brainwashed or trapped by

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effort

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of

evil doers

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.

For example

, my cousin was hypnotized in the city-hall market and he handed over his cash within few minutes. So, all in

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youngster

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cannot able to read what is coming, unless it happens. In conclusion, I think that juveniles should be monitored closely if they are working or travelling.

Although

, they are learning some new ideas and skills from

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a bad gathering is enough to destroy a bright career.