You have seen an advertisement looking for volunteers to teach English overseas. Write to the recruitment office. In your letter •Tell them where you saw the advertisement •Explain why you would like to go •Describe the skills that you have that you think would help

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing

this

letter with regard to an advertisement for a volunteer to teach

English

overseas.

To begin

with, please note that I have seen the advertisement in the "Star News" dated 1st July 2024 mentioned that you are looking for a volunteer who can teach

English

overseas.

Therefore

, here I am giving my details for consideration. I would like to apply for

this

activity as I am very passionate and well-experienced in volunteering and I have been associated with an overseas NGO in the past,

hence

, I am fully aware of the methodology and how to teach

English

to individuals. I have done a Master's in

English

and have 10 years of teaching experience in various NGOs and institutes.

Moreover

, I am

also

a certified

English

trainer from IDP and Cambridge. To add, I am a

linguistics

Replace the word

linguist

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who can speak

English

and French both. In view of

this

, I believe that I will be the most appropriate person to teach

English

effectively and systematically. Kindly consider me for

this

position. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Rob Steve,

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8 paragraphs

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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