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some people believe that zoos where animals are kept in a man-made environment should no longer exist in the 21st century.Do you agree or disagree ?

#people #zoos #animals #environment #st #century
Some people assert that
animals
 in zoos where they
kept
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are kept
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 in
prosthetic
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a prosthetic
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environment
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environments
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 should disappear in the 21 st century.I
agrees
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 with
this
 statement because
animals
 have to get freedom and
man-made
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a man-made
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 environment
not
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is not
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 suitable for them.In
this
essay
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i
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I
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 will
expain
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explain
 why
this
 an inappropriate.
Firstly
 ,
everyones
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everyone's
everyone
 love their freedom in life.
Animals
are belong
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belong
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 to natural places.Where they can feel free and hunt their
foods
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food
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.
In addition
 ,they are not caught in
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a cage
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cage
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cages
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 or in
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a place
the place
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place
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places
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 where there are
planty
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plenty
 of humans are living like metro cities.In spite of
this
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,this
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 they do not feel comfortable and have
limitied
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limited
 space for them.Because of that
reasons
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reason
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,sometimes the
were died
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died
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 before the time.
For instance
 ,in
largest
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the largest
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 zoos
of
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in
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america
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America
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 100
of
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apply
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birds were died due to
weather
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the weather
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conditon
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condition
conditions
of
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in
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polluted
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 city.Even in
this
 growing technological world , the
readiation
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radiation
 of
high frequency
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network
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networks
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 impacted
harmful
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a harmful
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 effect on birds.
Secondly
 ,in
this
 recent time very large amount of species are
gonig
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going
 to
exitiction
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extinction
. More likely due to they were
perison
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person
 in
cage
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a cage
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 .the best way to save endangered species is by
protecteing
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protecting
 them in natural habitats.
Additionally
 ,zoos exhibit
animals
 with the aim of making money.With help of
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,them
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them
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the
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 people get
high
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a high
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 amount of cash.To make customers happy the train the
animals
 .many company attracted by
this
 idea of marketing of their product.
For example
 , 20 % in television adverting they use the
animals
 like dogs ,lion and different types of birds. In conclusion, each and every animal on earth like their freedom,
although
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they
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the
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they
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 are not suitable to live in mad made places.So we should not
kept
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keep
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 them in
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the zoo
a zoo
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zoo
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zoos
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.
zoo
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Zoos
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 must
be replace
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 by jungles and natural habitats.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Ethical considerations
  • Wildlife conservation
  • Artificial habitats
  • Species preservation
  • Breeding programs
  • Animal welfare
  • Ecological awareness
  • Habitat destruction
  • Captive breeding
  • Educational outreach
  • Physical wellbeing
  • Psychological stress
  • Regulatory compliance
  • Domestication vs. wildness
  • Natural behavior
  • Economic viability
  • Tourist attractions
  • Cultural perspective
  • Public sentiment
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