some people believe that zoos where animals are kept in a man-made environment should no longer exist in the 21st century.Do you agree or disagree ?

Some people assert that

animals

in zoos where they

kept

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in

prosthetic

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a prosthetic

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environment

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environments

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should disappear in the 21 st century.I

agrees

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with

this

statement because

animals

have to get freedom and

man-made

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a man-made

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environment

not

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is not

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suitable for them.In

this

essay

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i

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will

expain

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explain

why

this

an inappropriate.

Firstly

,

everyones

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everyone's

everyone

love their freedom in life.

Animals

are belong

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to natural places.Where they can feel free and hunt their

foods

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food

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.

In addition

,they are not caught in

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a cage

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cage

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cages

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or in

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a place

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place

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places

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where there are

planty

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plenty

of humans are living like metro cities.In spite of

this

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they do not feel comfortable and have

limitied

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limited

space for them.Because of that

reasons

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,sometimes the

were died

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before the time.

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,in

largest

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zoos

of

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in

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america

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America

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100

of

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apply

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birds were died due to

weather

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conditon

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condition

conditions

of

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in

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polluted

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city.Even in

this

growing technological world , the

readiation

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radiation

of

high frequency

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network

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networks

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impacted

harmful

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effect on birds.

Secondly

,in

this

recent time very large amount of species are

gonig

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going

to

exitiction

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extinction

. More likely due to they were

perison

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person

in

cage

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a cage

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.the best way to save endangered species is by

protecteing

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protecting

them in natural habitats.

Additionally

,zoos exhibit

animals

with the aim of making money.With help of

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them

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people get

high

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amount of cash.To make customers happy the train the

animals

.many company attracted by

this

idea of marketing of their product.

For example

, 20 % in television adverting they use the

animals

like dogs ,lion and different types of birds. In conclusion, each and every animal on earth like their freedom,

although

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they

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the

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they

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are not suitable to live in mad made places.So we should not

kept

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keep

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them in

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the zoo

a zoo

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zoo

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zoos

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.

zoo

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must

be replace

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by jungles and natural habitats.