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Many children these days have an unhealthy lifestyle. Both schools and parents are responsible for solving this problem.

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Parents
 play a vital role to teach their
children
 a healthy lifestyle. Is it necessary ? There are those who claim that nowadays, young
children
parents
 are adopting sedentary Life which creates several health problems .
However
, opponents disagree with the above statement and opine that
school
 respective authorities are responsible for
this
.
Thus
this
 essay will discuss who is responsible for that their foster or
school
 department. The
first
 primary reason behind the unhealthy lifestyle of
school
children
 is their
parents
 those has a busy schedule of work and long working hours of their office make them exhaust .They order online fast food
instead
 of making a fresh healthy nutritional meals for Their younger ones.
consequently
, nursery
school
children
 could not be fully mentally developed due to
this
 habit.
Moreover
, lack of physical activities they are becoming overweight. it directly impacts Their studies. Another reason of
school
 authorities introduce some weekly diet plan charts for Their students. Which is not nutrients based rich diet, so, lack of nutritious food create health problems ,
for example
, overweight, diabetes, chronic decreases. It will affect Their overall performance.
Furthermore
, if their cognitive skills will not develop they will be unable to help their particular nation's development which is important for every country . To conclude,
although
,
school
 department and Their biological
parents
 only full fill Their food requirements. But, they should concentrate
also
 to adopt a healthy lifestyle
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • unhealthy lifestyle
  • growing concern
  • crucial role
  • addressing this issue
  • promote healthy habits
  • educational programs
  • physical activities
  • establish healthy routines
  • nutritious meals
  • collaboration
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