You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Dear Ms. Andersen,
I am writing
this
letter to inform you that at this
moment I have a really hard situation related to my free time which I usually spend to
studying for your course. It seems like I will not have an opportunity to continue improving my knowledge in the field of my current course at Change preposition
apply
this
time in the evening.
I regret to inform you my working schedule was modified by my manager at my work due to
that some of my colleagues were fired. Moreover
, the company decided to make significant changes in employees' timetable relatively with performance at work so we are going to work in the evening every weekday.
However
, I would like to carry on studying your course because it is closely linked to my vested interest. If we have an opportunity to make classes in the morning, I would like to take classes at this
time. Furthermore
, It will be a remarkable decision to continue the process of studying.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Ignat BernSubmitted by yauhen.ilyushenka on
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coherence cohesion
The letter successfully communicates the intended message; however, the logical structure could be improved by clearly organizing the content into paragraphs, each addressing a specific point of the task.
task achievement
Task achievement could be enhanced by providing more detailed explanations of each point and a clearer request regarding the desired action. Transition phrases should be used to improve flow and clarity.
coherence cohesion
Introduce each main idea with a clear topic sentence and provide supporting details within the same paragraph to maintain single ideas per paragraph.
task achievement
Ensure that the tone is consistently formal and polite as befits the context of a letter to an educator. Avoid overly casual phrases and maintain professional language throughout.