Families who send their children to private schools should not be required to pay taxes that support the state education system. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Many parents, who decide to send their children to private
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, think that
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should not be
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compulsory to afford
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, which support the state education system. I strongly disagree with
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statement because there are many advantages to pay
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.
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, how the
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can help schools develop is that they are spent on a comfortable building, and they can be
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foundation
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to study
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need to more
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library, where support
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to pay more attention, finesses, high technological computers and others than normal schools to entertain
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after they have finished their classes because they have to live and stay with their
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entire
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week
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might be able to pull more potential than normal schools.
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, the possibility of people, who do not decide to pay
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of
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spent money on the negative way
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bigger sing, it will not help anything, the
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might not be able to use some new building, where
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built because
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domination
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of teachers. To conclude, I strongly disagree with
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statement because the
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can support a lot of
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, which is necessary for
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a student
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student
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such
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foundation
, or larger building.
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, the parents should examine what money will
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • tax exemption
  • public education
  • private schools
  • collective responsibility
  • societal welfare
  • equitable access
  • financial burden
  • social cohesion
  • tax credits
  • vouchers
  • subsidies
  • state-funded
  • socioeconomic disparities
  • public vs. private sector
  • quality of education
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