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Some people belive that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Other argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

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Currently, we live in a world in which
people
 get used to living with their bad salaries, with
their
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 jobs that make them unhappy, and in general, with their sad and
depressed
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 lives. But there are some
people
, who decide to leave the common coast and seek their happiness before anything. Now, I will show my point of view about these two possible situations. It is said that young
people
 are the future of society and that we should fight for it; but many young adults, at the end of their 4 or 5-year university degree, must look for work and find a reality which is that they
don´t
 have any experience and the possible job they acquire will not be what they are looking for, so they won´t be happy and they will not receive a salary commensurate with their effort. Another clear example is the woman who wants to rise to a position in her company but she cannot because of the machismo that exists in her work or because she doesn´t have the necessary studies,
likewise
, there are
people
 who
don´t
 have the resources to access to
a
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higher education and they get nothing but minimum wage jobs. There are many
people
 who say that
people
 who get used to living with
that
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 they have is because they
don´t
 want to get ahead, but it is not true, there are
people
 who
don´t
 have options. Just as recent college graduates have to gain experience to start earning good wages, the woman who is unhappy with her job may not be able to leave it because she has a family to support, and the
people
 who are in a cleaning job,
they
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do it to one day pay for a university.
That is
 why I think that the world we are in doesn´t allow us to do much more than we would like, and
although
people
don´t
 feel identified with their work, they do it so that in the future they do not depend on it and move forward as they would like, all human beings carry their progress in the world and to get out of the common coast, one must
first
 be involved in it.
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