Topic: People now have the freedom to work and live anywhere in the world due to the development of communication technology and transportation. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

People have their own choice of living. Nowadays, most

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people have access to live and work in different parts of the world. As there are more prominent ways to travel and communicate with each other. In my opinion, staying

in

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abroad makes

life

more

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easier and comfortable with minor cultural differences.

This

essay will discuss both pros and cons in ensuring paragraphs and

also

include my personal opinion. To commence,

First

of all, one of the main

advantage

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of living

in

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abroad is developing language skills and different

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lifestyles

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life styles

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. What I mean by

this

is whoever travel to states have more access to communicate and work with people who speak

local

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language.

In addition

, it makes

life

more comfortable than living in the native place,

this

is because as there are more

convinent

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convenient

ways of transportation which they can travel easily to anywhere in the world.

For example

, most of the Indians prefer to live in

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states

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for work, study and business to lead a luxuries time. In my point of view, selecting a good

life

makes future

generation

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better. On the other side, there are few drawbacks which

involves

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in

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leaving their own country.

However

,

this

will lead to missing

of

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childhood memories, culture and even end up

loosing

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extended

relation

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in family.

Furthermore

, those

whoever

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settled in states might

endup

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end up

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loosing

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the

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native culture.

For instance

, most of the

punjabi's

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Punjabis

Punjabi's

Punjab's

move

to

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abroad for business and get busy with it, as well as there is no chance to move back to their home country as they may

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loose

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nationality. To sum up, having a successful

life

for the individual choice with having better communication skills and transportation.

Although

there are some negatives involved in it, the

advantges

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advantages

of living and working in foreign countries

wins

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the

otherside

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other side

.