These days, more and more people move away from the area where they were born and brought up when they become adults. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

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In the current situation,
people
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migrate from the
place
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of birth to the
place
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of adulthood. I think that the advantages of
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phenomenon outweigh the disadvantages for the following two reasons.
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, I realize that there may be some problems related to
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development.
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of all,
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who have been in contact with different countries or different parts of the world will
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feel more comfortable with different religions, cultures, dialects and eating habits.
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will give you a more international perspective and encourage compassion and tolerance for others. These
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will be more "global" in their thinking, which is exactly what is needed in all areas of life.
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, by walking,
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can adopt best practices in education, technology, policy development, finance, etc. in other fields.
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knowledge can be used to improve one's hometown.
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,
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born in remote villages may move to larger cities after completing their education to find better job prospects.
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, to increase income, the person can
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bring technical knowledge (
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as mobile data) to benefit other villagers who may not know these things.
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, if more and more
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settle in other areas, a population explosion is possible in a particular
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. In
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case, due to the high concentration of population living in a region, competition for basic needs
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will intensify. Another problem is the "brain drain".
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can happen when a particular person settles in another area after spending a lot of time and resources in another area. In general, the migration of
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from the
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of birth and growth to the area where they grew up is mainly a positive development, but it has certain limitations.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • metropolitan
  • migration
  • globalization
  • socio-economic factors
  • traditional norms
  • cosmopolitan environment
  • brain drain
  • assimilation
  • gentrification
  • alienation
  • multiculturalism
  • infrastructure strain
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