People find it difficult to speak in front of public or to give a presentation. How important is to have the skill of speaking. Do you think children at school should be taught public speaking.

Can you imagine a
life
without
water
? Many scientists believe that we will not have the same quantity and quality of
water
we have nowadays in the future. In
this
text, we will explain
this
problem, and we will suggest some useful solutions and individual practices
to
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reduce the problem of lack of
water
. We are all conscious
about
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the importance of
water
in our everyday
life
. It is used for nutrition, in farming, in producing electricity, in feeding animals, and so on. It is true that
currently
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we can recycle
water
so we can
use
it again and again, but we should bear in mind that recycled
water
does not have the same quantity and quality as it was originally. It is worth mentioning that we
use
only 1% for all the activities we mentioned before, and the rest is ocean
water
which requires a
lot
of money and energy to transform
it
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water
.
Furthermore
, much tension may arise from making
use
of
water
, leading to political issues, not to mention the harmful effect it has on climate change and other climate issues. There are many solutions proposed by environmental organizations, but why do not we start with the simple acts that can be done by individuals? If each
one
of us uses just the
water
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need for
an
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activity and do not overuse it, we would preserve
water
enough for us and for the coming generations. We can,
for example
, reduce our shower time, so it does not have to be
one
hour a day, where 5 minutes can be sufficient. We have
also
to raise awareness among children
,
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so that it becomes a principle in their education. Maybe
one
day the future generations will be grateful for our simple acts! Let us consider some activities that
use
a
lot
of
water
. In fact, every summer, a
lot
of swimming pools
use
a huge amount of
water
that is
changed at least every three days. Imagine that all
this
water
is gone while other people are waiting for
water
just to wash their hands, and sometimes just to have a glass of
water
. Why do not we reduce the usage of swimming pools, and
instead
go to beaches, lakes, and other natural spaces? On the
one
hand,
this
will prevent
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of
water
, and
on the other hand
, it is better for our health.
In addition
, some plants need a
lot
of
water
to survive, and they are just used to decorate streets and surfaces. Why do not we replace them with other plants that can survive with little
water
? We know that plants protect us and have several benefits, but
water
is a must in our
life
. Some materials can
also
help individuals and companies to reduce
water
usage and energy consumption,
such
as automatic taps. These devices can be both environment-friendly and cost-effective, not to mention that they prevent
water
and energy waste. It is true that we have a
lot
of solutions, but individuals should be aware and keen on applying them, or else the issue will worsen. We have to change our
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first
, so it is the
first
step to save our
water
, and
hence
save our
life
and our world.
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