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Online education is becoming more and more popular. Some people claim that e-learning has so many benefits that it will replace face-to-face education soon. Others say that traditional education is irreplaceable. discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Studying online is becoming increasingly popular. Some people believe that online
education
 is so beneficial that traditional classroom-based learning will be replaced while others do not.
This
 essay will discuss both sides of the argument and provide evidence as to why e-learning will substitute face-to-face
education
. To being with, more and more people are choosing online
education
 for they have the chance to save
time
 and arrange their daily
time
 schedule as they want. Nowadays,
time
 is a valuable resource so that’s why e-learning has been a huge benefit for those who always are in a rush
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 because they can watch the classes whenever they desire. Despite a huge number of
students
 have to work, in order to pay for their
education
, now they all are able to keep doing both activities without any problem,
also
 the amount of
time
 that
students
 can save
as a result
 of not having to travel any more can be spent in their personal lives. In many universities, a surprising increment in applicant’s solicitudes for their online courses has been registered.
As a result
, most of these educational institutes have to reorganize some of their face-to face-classes into online courses so as to keep receiving more
students
.
On the other hand
, those who claim the opposite believe that traditional
education
 is the best way for
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 to develop their social skills. Learning in a traditional classroom-based course make the
students
 interact not only with the professor but with the others learners too. Rising abilities
such
 as, how to express an idea, working in groups or just making a friend, are vital things that will help them in their future.
For example
, in a wide variety of jobs working as a team is something natural. If someone never underwent
this
 kind of activity, the group will have more problems in order to achieve their goals.
Hence
, face to face
education
 makes
students
 learn about a particular subject while they develop others abilities. In conclusion, I believe that e-learning is the future of
education
 because it allows us to spend our
time
 as we wish. People will be able to study from their homes and enjoy these extra hours. Despite some of them may have a job, now, with the help of technology they can
also
 enrol in a course in order to keep learning.
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  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • e-Learning
  • face-to-face education
  • remote learning
  • virtual classroom
  • webinar
  • digital platform
  • self-paced learning
  • interactive learning
  • course accessibility
  • academic networking
  • pedagogy
  • synchronous/asynchronous sessions
  • MOOCs (Massive Open Online Courses)
  • edtech (educational technology)
  • holistic development
  • practical skills
  • collaborative learning
  • digital divide
  • curriculum adaptation
  • technological literacy
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