Some people prefer to buy local products while others prefer to buy international products to what extent do you agree or disagree?

In
this
cutting edge era ,there is no shadow of a doubt that Trent of buying international
products
is increased day by day. A major chunk of genetry is inclined towards
purchase
imported
items
whereas others prefer to consume domestic
items
.I agree with
this
notion up to a larger extent, that international
products
are more evident than local as they have good stuff as compare to the local
items
To commence with the cardinal reasons that international
products
are better than local.
First
and foremost, global
products
are of good quality and value of money as there are a lot of brands
products
such
as Nike ,Puma ,Adidas etcetera they keep consumers comfort and requirements at their top priority.
for instance
couple of months ago I
purchase
a pair of shoes from international online shopping app , that shoes are of Adidas brand and its inner stuff is very comfortable still I'm wearing it while I'm going outside from home.
Furthermore
, the main reason for purchasing international
items
is the maintenance of social status, nowadays every individual is status-conscious and feels pride wearing international branded
products
.the mindset of wearing top-notch
products
does not let people
purchase
domestic
items
. On the flip side, some dwellers believe that locally produced
products
are more convenient to
purchase
or use because they are pocket friendly anyone can easily buy that according to their budget.,
Moreover
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if more and more individuals consume local
products
it boosts the economic level of their nation which is fruitful for the development of the nation. In conclusion,both international and local
products
have their own merits and demerits
thus
, in my opinion, everyone should buy
products
according to their taste or budget
however
I mostly prefer to
purchase
international
items
they are a little bit expensive but it fulfils my satisfaction
Submitted by naresh on

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