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Stress is now the major problem in many countries around the world. What are some of the factors in the modern society that cause it, and how can we reduce it?

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There is no doubt that
people
 around the world consider
stress
 as the major issue.
This
 essay will discuss few reasons that can lead to
this
 and suggests certain ways to decrease the level of
stress
 in a society.
To begin
 with causes, constantly increasing amount of information, work and household-related pressure, as well as exercise deficiency, might be considered as the major contributors of the alarming level of weight in the world. Social media not only continuously supplies individuals with an infinite stream of random information but
also
 creates an illusion of instability which raises
people
’s anxiety.
Moreover
, with an absence of easy-accessible social support, domestic and work-related problems pressure individuals’ minds and create an additional source of
stress
.
Lastly
, the inability to release
stress
 through moderate physical activity leads to a summation of
stress
-related factors. Continuing with measures that can be done, introducing services that can facilitate
people
’s life should reduce the amount of
stress
. Having access to affordable childcare facilities may eliminate parental anxiety. Knowing that a child will be chaperoned allows parents to be more
stress
-relieved at work.
Furthermore
, using a human resource to provide extra support for work-related conflicts will make
people
 feel more protected and
therefore
 happier. Penultimately, sport as the main weapon to oppose
stress
 is being ignored in nowadays society.
For example
, according to the British Medical Journal, individuals who spend at least 3 hours per week in a gymnasium tend to be significantly
stress
-resistant and
consequently
 live longer lives. Creating facilities and engaging
people
 to participate could be another way to reduce
stress
 in the general public. In conclusion, there are different problems that causing substantial tension among
people
 and only wise governmental measures can overcome
this
 problem.
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