Some people think building more roads can reduce the traffic.what do you think of this soltuion?

In
this
cutting edge era.As we March triumphantly towards glare and glitter of sophisticated life become a bed of roses and everyone wants to enjoy it by considering to
this
major chunk of gentry prefer to travel by their own vehicle
thus
it give birth to
traffic
Congestion. a number of dwellers believe that building more
roads
become fruitful to reduce
traffic
,
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I believe that only road building is not an option there are numerous ways to curb
this
problem.
First
and foremost, the government should have to provide more facilities in public transportation to influence more and more individuals to avoid the use of their vehicles as it does not only produce
traffic
but
also
is a breeding ground for air pollution which cause a noxious impact on human life.
Moreover
,legislation has to build more parking areas because some times number of dwellers park their vehicles on the
roads
which become the main reason for increasing
traffic
.
Furthermore
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stray animals came on the main highways it is
also
the main issue behind increasing
traffic
and accidents
thus
government have to make some areas for stray animals so that they don't come on the
roads
. Apart from
this
to reduce the
traffic
is the responsibility of individuals
also
they have to encourage the carpooling which is fruit-bearing for weed out the
traffic
problem and
also
it saves money. In conclusion ,widen the
roads
and ,build-up the new
roads
are an effective way to reduce the
traffic
jams but there are some other ways
also
which cannot be neglected
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